The Story (continued)
Phyllis
Dietrichson describes her imprisonment in an emotionless, boring
marriage to her tight-fisted husband:
Phyllis: He has a lot on his mind. He doesn't seem
to want to listen to anything except maybe a baseball game on the
radio. Sometimes we sit here all evening and never say a word to
each other.
Walter: Sounds pretty dull.
Phyllis: So I just sit and knit.
Walter: Is that what you married him for?
Phyllis: Maybe I like the way his thumbs hold up the wool.
Walter: Anytime his thumbs get tired. Only with me around, you wouldn't
have to knit.
Phyllis: Wouldn't I?
Walter: You bet your life you wouldn't. (He sips from his iced tea
glass) I wonder if a little rum would get this up on its feet.
Obviously an experienced predator and knowing of Neff's
undisguised lustful interest in her, she inquires about buying an
accident insurance policy for her husband - without him knowing
about it, "without bothering him at all...he needn't know anything
about it." Supposedly Mr. Dietrichson would be "superstitious
about it" and would not order it himself. Walter reacts negatively,
clearly thinking it's a set-up:
Phyllis: You see what I mean, Walter?
Walter: Sure. I've got good eyesight. You mean you want him to have
the policy without him knowing it. And that means without the
insurance company knowing that he doesn't know it. That's the
setup, isn't it?
Phyllis: Is there anything wrong with it?
Walter: No, I think it's lovely. Then, if some dark wet night, that
crown block did fall on him -
Phyllis: What crown block?
Walter: Only sometimes it can't quite make it on its own. It has
to have a little help.
Phyllis: I don't know what you're talking about.
Walter: Of course, it doesn't have to be a crown block. It can be
a car backing over him, or he could fall out of the upstairs window.
Any little thing like that, just so it's a morgue job.
Phyllis: Are you crazy?
Walter: Not that crazy. Good-bye, Mrs. Dietrichson.
He is shocked and unsettled at her suggestion of accident
insurance - and speculates about her concealed desire to liquidate
her husband and collect the payoff. Neff prepares to leave, too astute
(he believes) to be fooled by an insurance deal that may lead to
murder. He condescends to her, calling her 'baby':
Walter: Look, baby. You can't get away with it. You
want to knock him off, don't ya?
Phyllis: That's a horrible thing to say.
Walter: Whaddya think I was anyway? A guy that walks into a good-looking
dame's front parlor and says, 'Good afternoon. I sell accident insurance
on husbands. Have you got one that's been around too long? One you'd
like to turn into a little hard cash? Just give me a smile and I'll
help you collect?' Huh! Boy, what a dope you must think I am!
Phyllis: I think you're rotten.
Walter: I think you're swell. So long as I'm not your husband.
Phyllis: Get out of here.
Walter: You bet I'll get out of here, baby. I'll get out of here
but quick.
Rejecting the whole idea (she "can't get away
with it"), he promptly leaves. As he exits the house and walks
to his car to drive away, he expresses his thoughts of clever omniscience
- in voice-over:
So I let her have it, straight between the eyes.
She didn't fool me for a minute, not this time. I knew I had ahold
of a red hot poker, and the time to drop it was before it burned
my hand off.
Neff buys a bottle of beer at a drive-in to wash away
the "sour taste"
of the iced tea, and then to a bowling alley at Third and Western to
try to lose himself by rolling a few lines. Returning to his darkly-lit
apartment from the rainy dark outdoors, he stands in the dark by the
window and then paces in his living room - imagining a masochistic
image of playing with the woman (a "red-hot poker"):
I was all twisted up inside and I was still holding
on to that red-hot poker. And right then it came over me that I
hadn't walked out on anything at all, that the hope was too strong,
that this wasn't the end between her and me. It was only the beginning.
His attempt to walk out on her is futile when she stands
in the doorway of his darkened apartment. As he expects, "as
if it was the most natural thing in the world," at 8 pm his
apartment bell rings and Phyllis appears in the moody light - on
the pretense of returning his hat from earlier that afternoon - but
she has nothing in her hands - and strolls in after asking: "Don't
you want me to bring it in?" He instructs her to put the non-existent
hat on the chair. [In his dark apartment's wall are small framed,
hanging pictures of a non-gloved boxer.] Phyllis explains that she
has located him from the phone book. When she peels off her coat,
she is seen wearing a very tight, form-fitting white sweater designed
to entice him. She tries to explain to him that she had no malicious
intent and that he may have the wrong impression about her: "I
must have said something that gave you a terribly wrong impression.
You must never think anything like that about me, Walter."
She looks at him intensely and requests: "I want
you to be nice to me, like the first time you came to the house." But
Walter tells her: "It can't be like the first time. Something's
happened." Although things have changed since their first meeting,
she encourages what "has happened," explaining: "I
know it has. It's happened to us." By the wet window pane, Phyllis
relates more about the suffocating relationship she has in her marriage:
Phyllis: I feel as if he was watching me. Not that
he cares, not anymore. But he keeps me on a leash so tight I can't
breathe.
Walter: He's in Long Beach, isn't he? Relax.
Phyllis: Maybe I oughtn't to have come.
Walter: Maybe you oughtn't.
Phyllis: You want me to go?
Walter: If you want to.
Phyllis: Right now?
Walter: Sure. Right now.
But as she drifts away from him to leave, he grabs
her by the wrist and kisses her, feverishly telling her:
Walter: I'm crazy about you, baby.
Phyllis: I'm crazy about you, Walter.
Walter: The perfume on your hair. What's the name of it?
Phyllis: I don't know. I bought it in Ensenada.
Walter: You ought to have some of that pink wine to go with it. The
kind that bubbles. All I got is bourbon.
Phyllis: Bourbon is fine, Walter.
In the dark kitchen while preparing the drinks, Walter
impresses her with the facts about two fraudulent accident insurance
claims, both filed by wives against their deceased husbands. The
second case, in which the wife claimed her husband was cleaning his
gun and shot himself in the stomach, ended with a prison term for
the wife: "All she collected was a three-to-ten stretch in Tehachapi." Phyllis
responds: "Perhaps it was worth it to her."
Back in the living room with their drinks, Phyllis
again explains about being trapped in a loveless marriage to her
domineering and mean husband Dietrichson (his second marriage) and
about his live-in daughter named Lola (Jean Heather) from his first
marriage. She envies Walter's independence:
It sounds wonderful. Just strangers beside you. You
don't know them and you don't hate them. You don't have to sit
across the table and smile at him and that daughter of his every
morning of your life...He thinks a lot more of her than he does
of me.
Phyllis is unable to convince the hateful Mr. Dietrichson
to grant her a divorce. She married him out of pity after the death
of his first wife (who was sick for a long time), when she served
as the wife's nurse:
Phyllis: When she died, he was terribly broken up.
I-I pitied him so.
Neff: And now you hate him.
Phyllis: Yes, Walter. He's so mean to me. Every time I buy a dress
or a pair of shoes, he yells his head off. He never lets me go anywhere.
He keeps me shut up. He's always been mean to me. Even his life insurance
all goes to that daughter of his. That Lola.
Walter: Nothing for you at all, huh?
Phyllis: No, and nothing is just what I'm worth to him.
Walter: So you lie awake in the dark and listen to him snore and
get ideas.
Phyllis: Walter, I don't want to kill him. I never did. Not even
when he gets drunk and slaps my face.
Walter: Only sometimes you wish he was dead.
Phyllis: Perhaps I do.
Walter: And you wish it was an accident and you had that policy for
$50,000 dollars. Is that it?
Phyllis: Perhaps that too.
Phyllis imagines killing her husband in an enclosed
garage by carbon monoxide poisoning. Although Neff is in the perfect
position to plan and execute a fool-proof insurance fraud, he is
worried about one potential problem in his office - their nemesis
- the cunning, investigative Keyes who uses intuitive hunches to
solve claims cases:
If you had that accident policy and tried to pull
a monoxide job, we've got a guy in our office named Keyes. For
him, a set-up like that would just be like a slice of rare roast
beef. In three minutes, he'd know it wasn't an accident. In ten
minutes, you'd be sitting under the hot lights. In a half hour,
you'd be signing your name to a confession...They (the insurance
company) know more tricks than a carload of monkeys. And if there's
a death mixed up in it, you haven't got a prayer. They'll hang
you just as sure as ten dimes will buy a dollar.
Phyllis cries about her predicament as he holds her
on the sofa. He puts his arms around her and tells her: "And
I don't want you to hang, baby. Stop thinking about it, will ya?"
Neff admits that he is taken by her teary-eyed seductiveness,
as the scene dissolves back to Neff's office where he continues to
dictate into the dictaphone for Keyes' benefit. In an important "roulette
wheel" speech, Neff explains that because he has learned the
mechanics of the insurance business so intimately, one of his motivations
to attempt the perfect murder is to challenge and irreverently rebel
against the system in order to beat it:
So we just sat there, and she started crying softly
like the rain on the window. And we didn't say anything. Maybe
she had stopped thinking about it, but I hadn't. I couldn't because
it was all tied up with something I'd been thinking about for years.
Since long before I ever ran into Phyllis Dietrichson. Because,
you know how it is Keyes, in this business you can't sleep for
trying to figure out all the tricks they could pull on you. You're
like the guy behind the roulette wheel, watching the customers
to make sure they don't crook the house. And then one night, you
get to thinking how you could crook the house yourself. And do
it smart. Because you've got that wheel right under your hands.
You know every notch in it by heart. And you figure all you need
is a plant out front, a shill to put down the bet. And suddenly
the doorbell rings and the whole setup is right there in the room
with ya. (pause) Look, Keyes, I'm not trying to whitewash myself.
I fought it, only I guess I didn't fight it hard enough. The stakes
were $50,000 dollars, but they were the life of a man too, a man
who'd never done me any dirt except he was married to a woman he
didn't care anything about. And I did.
The scene tracks/dissolves back to Walter's apartment,
the same evening, where Neff reclines on the sofa smoking a cigarette,
and Phyllis is fixing her makeup. [The viewer is drawn back into
their murderous plot with this second dissolve. What has transpired
between them during the dissolve is suggestively hinted at. She has
definitely told him her guilty secret, and they have presumably had
experienced sexual knowledge of each other.] Phyllis, who has been
sitting next to him, gets up and puts on her coat to leave. When
he doesn't answer her, absently lost in his own uncontrollable thoughts,
she calls again: "Walter!"
She expresses her disdain about returning to her husband. He has decided
to join her in scheming to kill her husband and help her make it look
like an accident - to collect on her husband's accident insurance policy:
Phyllis: I hate him. I loathe going back to him.
You believe me, don't you, Walter?
Walter: Sure I believe you. (They kiss.)
Phyllis: I can't stand it anymore. What if they did hang me?
Walter: They're not going to hang you, baby.
Phyllis: It's better than going on this way.
Walter: They're not gonna hang you because you're gonna do it and
I'm gonna help you.
Phyllis: Do you know what you're saying?
Walter: Sure I know what I'm saying. We're gonna do it and we're
gonna do it right. And I'm the guy that knows how.
He tells her that they're going to do it with a brilliant,
scheming plot. He grabs her tightly and digs his fingers into her
arm. Neff expresses himself with a fierce determination in his voice,
vowing that everything must be perfection
"straight down the line":
There's not going to be any slip up. Nothing sloppy,
nothing weak, it's gotta be perfect. (They kiss each other and
then he leads her toward the door.) Call me tomorrow. But not from
your house. From a booth. And watch your step every single minute.
This has gotta be perfect, do ya understand? Straight down the
line.
As she goes out the door, she repeats his words: "Straight
down the line."
He slowly walks across to his window, opens it wide, and stands there,
listening to the sounds of her car start and then drive off into the
rain. They plan to collect $100,000 in double indemnity insurance so
they can run off together.
The voice-over narration dissolves back to the scene
in Neff's office, as he describes into the dictaphone his newly-formed
compulsion: "That was it, Keyes. The machinery had started to
move and nothing could stop it." He also tells Keyes that he
has anticipated the kinds of investigative questions the claims agent
would inevitably ask:
I was trying to think with your brains, Keyes, 'cause
I wanted all the answers ready for all the, all the questions you
were gonna spring as soon as Dietrichson was dead.
Although there is danger in their plan, Neff meets
a few nights later with Mr. Dietrichson to sign up for the auto insurance
renewal. Neff feels "queer in the belly" that Dietrichson's
daughter Lola serves as a witness, although she sits playing Chinese
Checkers with Phyllis at a table on the other side of the room (in
a mid-shot) and leaves before witnessing her father's signature.
Before leaving, she vows (deceptively) to her irritated father that
she is only going out to meet a girlfriend, and not to rendezvous
with her unacceptable boyfriend (to her father) - a med-school drop-out.
Explaining to him that he must sign duplicate forms,
Neff is able to have the distracted Dietrichson sign what he thinks
is his renewal application for an auto insurance policy. Without
his knowledge, he is easily duped - and actually signs, with his
second signature, a $50,000 accident insurance policy with double
indemnity provisions. At the moment he signs on the "bottom
line," grumbling about "files, duplicates, triplicates," Walter's
and Phyllis's eyes meet - she is positioned between them in the camera's
framing. Outside the Dietrichson's front door, Phyllis whispers excitedly
to Walter:
"He signed it, didn't he?"
Walter explains that when her husband travels to Palo
Alto, California at the end of the month for his Stanford University
annual class reunion, he must not drive as usual, but take the train.
A double-indemnity clause, typical in every accident policy and intended
as "a come-on for the customers," means the company pays
twice the settlement if the insured party is accidentally killed
in a certain kind of accident - "the kind that almost never
happen."
Walter offers an example: "Like for instance, if a guy is killed
on the train, they pay a hundred thousand instead of fifty thousand...We're
hitting it for the limit, baby. That's why it's got to be the train." Phyllis
incants agreement with the familiar phrase, making it appear that the
plot is Walter's idea:
It'll be the train, Walter, just the way you want
it. Straight down the line.
When Walter reaches his Dodge coupe parked outside
the Dietrichson's garage, Lola surprises him when he looks in and
sees her sitting in the front seat. She requests a ride [an ambiguously
sexual invitation!] down the hill, down Vermont, although she is
not planning to go roller skating with girl friend Anne Matthews
as she earlier told her parents, but to see her penniless boyfriend
Nino Zachetti (Byron Barr) on the sly. [Both Lola and Phyllis are
engaged in clandestine relationships, with Neff and Zachetti, and
both women are manipulative toward Neff]:
I'm having a very tough time at home. My father doesn't
understand me and Phyllis hates me...That's why I have to lie sometimes...You
won't tell on me, will you?...I guess my father thinks nobody's
good enough for his daughter except maybe the guy that owns Standard
Oil. I wish he'd see it my way. I can't give Nino up.
Lola's secret relationship with Zachetti, a twenty-five
year old, tough-acting Italian who is considered "hotheaded," distracts
Neff from his murder plan. Neff's attitude toward Lola is also paternalistic,
making him a second "dead pigeon":
But right then, it gave me a nasty feeling to be
thinking about them at all, with that briefcase right behind my
head that had her father's signature in it and what that signature
meant. It meant he was a dead pigeon. It was only a question of
time, and not very much time at that.
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